Ok, here is my advice. This is a cool song and its clear you are stepping out of your comfort zone.
-Kick is too long, it's like a house kick? I can bootleg you terror drums from cymatics if youre comfortable with that for a better kick. the dubs have too much reverb by a lot and it fucks with the mix majorly, and it would sound a lot better significantly dryer, especially at like 2:36 etc.
HMU on discord if you want some cool drums.