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[Telaris - Intercosmic (WIP)]

The intro is interesting, very empty tho. You could add some chords to the piano, or some supersaw pads, it would sound 100% better. Maybe some bassline too.

Telaris responds:

I will add all of that

As soon as I finish my benchmarks tomorrow

[ok (Part of the ok EP)]

This intro is very original,I love it. I think it goes on a little bit too long with no change. When the piano comes in, the pads in the background sound a but out of key. At 00:53 the drums come in, and now its clear that they are loop. I think you should focus on programming your own loops and making things less repetitive, its clear that you have the basics down.

PeaZen1 responds:

thx for the constructive criticism and yes it is a sample but I chopped it up in different ways so it sounds different and the DAW I use is free and I cant make piano sounds and such so I have to use samples and yes im trying to make things less repetitive in my other tracks but anyway thx for the feedback

[Disappear]

Wow. This is really good, I'm impressed. The dubstep is very well-designed, the yoi basses could be louder but other than that, really nice job.

[On the Verge]

If that guitar is real, nice.
If its a loop, then nice mixing.

At 00:24 the strings come in and its like wtf. They all start and end randomly with now attack, and they are too loud. The buildup is ok other than the string things.
I love the drop... a lot. I think that the snare should have more power, but other than that, really nice.

[NoodleCast 91 [It all melts away]]

yo, get a spit screen, i can hear you spacking your lips

zergx responds:

idk what that means so please explain.

[Venomite - Windings]

yeah, this is kind olsool but nice vibes

[Khora - Samurai]

Dude, this is seriously awesome!

[A galaxy beyond]

ooh, nice
didn't know that you weren't scouted lol, you are now

[Venomite - Spaced Out]

Nice!
The main intro lead, the Avicci thing, sounds like it starts out oddly panned.
The vocal chops are really nice.
from 00:17 to 1:10, the drums are too slow, I think they could even be doubled in speed.
That little break thing is really nice!
Yeah, overall this is a really good song.

Venomite responds:

I thought the panning sounded pretty cool. Thx

[Zeptonix - Disparity]

Two main things:
In the intro, that main Rhodes-style lead has a lot of mid. Grab and EQ and take out the mid a little bit and it won't be so ear-piercing.
In the drop, the kick hits, and then the snare hits but with the kick as an underlayer. That can be ok, but in this case, the kick has too much bass and it takes away from the snare.

Nice tune.

DjCocsOFFICAL responds:

Thanks for the review :)