Lot7even's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dierkus - Lemonade]

At 00:2 add... something xD Maybe a darker pad or wierd fx.

At 00:27, more sub and odd basses. IDK if you have serum, but make wierd sounds on something.

Overall, really nice job.

DierkusOfficial responds:

Thanks for the tips!

[Tension Breaker]

This is very well made, I think the snare in the first drop needs more power. The arps in the drop need to be dropped, they are very loud, and the sub can be turned up. The wobs sound nice, but need more powa. Saturation, OTT, CamelCrusher, dimension expander. If you use ableton or FL, these are all available for free.

Th3TwisteD responds:

Thanks! :)

[Ray Daiko - Purple Overdrive (Purple Power VIP)]

holy hybrid trap

the rap is pretty cool, this you? the voice is a-ok, but the reverb is over-done. It might even be better with auto-tune like a post Malone song

As for the riddim drop, get some lost the fuckin reverb.

EDIT: I meant, on the basses and drums overall, the mix is just muddy. I think there is some element or elements with too much reverb on, causing the entire thing to be heavy sounding. lmao ," lose the fuckin reverb"

Dendra responds:

Understandable. I could use less reverb.

A bit harsh but not everyone sugar coats things. Thank you for the 5 star tho, means alot even tho it aint the best.

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it

[[Melodical Dubstep] オーラ]

Glad you're back! If you ever lose inspiration, I find it helpful to just listen to music for a while, then go back to it.

This song is pretty good!

FuzionTech responds:

thank you soo much. I appreciate it. 😀

[Telaris - Intercosmic (WIP)]

The intro is interesting, very empty tho. You could add some chords to the piano, or some supersaw pads, it would sound 100% better. Maybe some bassline too.

Telaris responds:

I will add all of that

As soon as I finish my benchmarks tomorrow

[ok (Part of the ok EP)]

This intro is very original,I love it. I think it goes on a little bit too long with no change. When the piano comes in, the pads in the background sound a but out of key. At 00:53 the drums come in, and now its clear that they are loop. I think you should focus on programming your own loops and making things less repetitive, its clear that you have the basics down.

PeaZen1 responds:

thx for the constructive criticism and yes it is a sample but I chopped it up in different ways so it sounds different and the DAW I use is free and I cant make piano sounds and such so I have to use samples and yes im trying to make things less repetitive in my other tracks but anyway thx for the feedback

[NoodleCast 91 [It all melts away]]

yo, get a spit screen, i can hear you spacking your lips

zergx responds:

idk what that means so please explain.

[A galaxy beyond]

ooh, nice
didn't know that you weren't scouted lol, you are now

[Venomite - Spaced Out]

Nice!
The main intro lead, the Avicci thing, sounds like it starts out oddly panned.
The vocal chops are really nice.
from 00:17 to 1:10, the drums are too slow, I think they could even be doubled in speed.
That little break thing is really nice!
Yeah, overall this is a really good song.

Venomite responds:

I thought the panning sounded pretty cool. Thx

[Zeptonix - Disparity]

Two main things:
In the intro, that main Rhodes-style lead has a lot of mid. Grab and EQ and take out the mid a little bit and it won't be so ear-piercing.
In the drop, the kick hits, and then the snare hits but with the kick as an underlayer. That can be ok, but in this case, the kick has too much bass and it takes away from the snare.

Nice tune.

DjCocsOFFICAL responds:

Thanks for the review :)